Content Warning: This story contains themes of dark comedy, crude humor, poverty, eviction threats, body odor (comedic), mild violence (referenced explosion, hair loss), blackmail, and discussions of crime and theft. It also includes depictions of a rundown apartment, expired food, and desperate living conditions. Reader discretion is advised.
Intro
Duppy and Duffy are the worst thieves alive. Three years, no rent. A landlord who has lost all hope. An apartment that smells so bad even the rodents have relocated. And a plan to go legit — a car wash business called DD CAR WASH. They have promised the good Lord they will change. They have promised each other. Then a letter arrives. No return address. No details. Just an offer: a million dollars each if they accept the job. Greedy Heart is waiting at the Black Heart Bar. The man in the dark suit is getting impatient. And Mr. Lucky, their long-suffering landlord, just wants his rent — but he will settle for knowing whether Mrs. Blueberry agreed to a date. This is a dark comedy about two criminals who are terrible at crime, a landlord who was born under a bad sign, and the morning they almost went straight. The smell is permanent. The decision is not.
Duppy And Duffy Saga
A Dark Comedy About Two Criminals, One Terrible Smell, and the Morning They Almost Went Straight
The Morning Knock
It was a warm morning. The sun came early, and you could hear birds chirping and horns blaring as early risers — those who wanted to beat the morning rush — hurried on. The street vendors could be heard shouting their wares, waiting for regular customers who bought before going to work. You could hear angry parents shouting for their kids to hurry or they would be late, and you could see the angry looks on the kids' faces, knowing they didn't want to go to school but had no choice.
The Landlord's Rounds
Then there was the landlord, going from door to door reminding those who owed him rent, either giving them quit notices or threatening to evict them in a week or two. He hurried to the last door and banged it, but no one answered. He grew angry and his face started getting redder. He banged the door harder this time, but still no one answered. His frustration mounted as he roared, "I KNEW YOU GUYS WERE IN THERE! IT HAS BEEN THREE YEARS AND NO RENT HAS BEEN PAID. THIS IS THE LAST TIME I WILL BE WARNING YOU — PAY MY RENT OR LEAVE MY HOUSE. IT IS NOT A CHARITY AND I HAVE TWENTY KIDS TO FEED."
And with that, he left the door and headed to his room, muttering about how it had come to this — three years, no rent, and all he got were excuses and a body odour that would not let him or anyone else last a few minutes just standing at that door. He swore that this time it would either be they pay, or he would remove their roof.
Duppy and Duffy
Right behind the locked door, a fat man sat on the only couch in the room. It was a three-seater, but only one seat was intact — and even that had an aluminium tin placed on it to stop it from caving in like the other two sides, both of which had large scorching holes. Looking at it closely, you would think it had been done by fire, but that wasn't the case. Just behind the couch, there was an open room where a thin man could be seen sleeping and snoring loud enough to wake the dead. It was a two-room apartment with a sitting room. The fat man had just come out and settled on the good side of the couch when the knock came. He knew it was their landlord, so he ignored him. The room was thrown with all manner of rubble — used cans everywhere and so much junk, but the most prominent of it all was the can of expired beans the fat man had eaten about a week ago.
There was a rustle behind him and he turned to see the slim man standing at his door, eyeing the door the landlord had just banged and walked away from.
"What is wrong with that man?" the slim man complained. "Can't he see someone is sleeping?"
"Yeah, the mean man was even shouting about his three years' rent," the fat man said, putting his leg on the wobbling table.
"How can he complain about rent in this dump?" the slim man said, eyeing the peeling paint, the broken sink, and the dust falling from the ceiling whenever those above walked — and they always walked or ran. He looked at the fat one, who wasn't even listening to him but was looking out the window.
"Anything interesting, Duppy?" the slim one asked, eyeing the street vendor who was counting some cash.
"Nothing to see today, Duffy. Just boring. Even the birds aren't happy perching on your window."
"What is the meaning of that?" Duffy asked, getting angry.
"You were snoring loud enough to wake the dead," Duppy said, still not looking at Duffy, and so missed the murder in his eyes.
"You're one to talk — after you made us lose a nice job. We could have retired to our own island, sipping coconut with a straw and an umbrella over our face."
"That was a week ago. It had nothing to do with me," Duppy said defensively.
"Nothing!" Duffy exclaimed. "Even my hair hasn't grown." He slapped the middle of his head, which looked burnt.
"It will grow. Give it some time," Duppy said, not meeting his eyes. He knew it would never grow again — that blast wasn't ordinary — but he tried to give Duffy hope. After all, it was his fault.
"It better grow," Duffy said, "or we will be having another conversation."
Mr. Lucky at the Door
There was another knock, and this time Duffy went and yanked the door open. Staring back at him was their landlord.
Mr. Lucky couldn't believe his name didn't apply to his real life. He used to be a salesman with an estate agency, and for the ten years he worked with them, he sold only one house. It was so bad that the company lost deals because of him and eventually had to let him go. He tried to open a grocery shop, and within a few months, he had eaten almost half of his products. Then he went into the transport business. He had been advised to leave it alone, but he had been stubborn. He bought a second-hand car and couldn't remember the last time he made any money from it. Instead, the car had been eating all his small savings — any day he put it on the road, he would spend money, and by the time they fixed one thing, another would have a problem.
He remembered the day he had made almost ten thousand dollars. He had been grinning, knowing it was a great haul — then in the middle of the road, the car stopped. No matter what he did, it wouldn't start, so he called the tow truck, which charged him four thousand dollars. By the time he reached the mechanic shop and an assessment of the damage was done, he went home with just fifty dollars. It had been one unlucky problem after another, until his father gave him this house and he abandoned every other venture, clinging to it as his last resort.
Now, standing at the door of his worst tenants, he couldn't believe his eyes. He thought he had been cursed — for three years they hadn't paid rent and always had one excuse. He wrinkled his nose as the door opened, wondering what sort of stuff they kept in there to produce such a smell. He was already heaving, and his eyes were watering. He clamped a hand over his nose — he had forgotten his nose mask again. He knew that an angry man always made the wrong decision, so he tried to calm himself.
"Good morning," the slim man said, grinning. "How is the family?"
"Where is my rent?" he asked, not bothering to exchange pleasantries.
"Come on now, Mr. Lucky. It is too early in the morning and we are about to go for a job. We will pay when we return."
"That is what you have been saying for three years now," Mr. Lucky said, taking a step back. *Damnit, what is that smell?* he thought, not daring to remove his hand from his nose.
"Don't worry. We will pay this time."
Mr. Lucky looked at him. He could see some change in his appearance — he looked like he had been through a lot. And his hair... no, Duffy wasn't bald. He was sure of that. Something must have happened. "What happened to your hair?" he asked. He could see the angry look flash across Duffy's face before he plastered on a grin like a cat eyeing a mouse. "Occupational hazard, you know."
"What sort of occupation? And it still hasn't brought in the rent."
"It will this time. I assure you."
"It better," Mr. Lucky said, moving further from Duffy. He had had enough and could faint any moment if he gulped any more of that smell from that room. He hurried to his own room, mentally promising to call an exterminator.
Going Legit
Duffy grunted as Mr. Lucky left. He closed the door and looked at Duppy. "We need a new job," he said, sitting on one of the broken seats — then jumped up at once as a spring bit into his rear. "Owh, that hurt! Told you not to fart on the couch, you stupid dummy."
"It was not my fault. That was last week," Duppy said.
"We need a job," Duffy said, ignoring the last remark. It was a miracle they weren't caught. He didn't want to remember that disastrous outing — it was supposed to be a clean and easy job, but what did he get in return? A bald head, and he had even been knocked out and had to be carried. "We need a job," he said again, this time with a hint of anger.
"What do you have in mind? We know nothing but stealing."
"Look around you," Duffy said, pointing at the run-down house. "Is this how you want to live?"
"What is wrong with it?" Duppy asked.
"Well, everything is wrong. We need to live better. You know, even the cat is afraid of the smell coming from here."
"That is your signature aroma," Duppy said.
"Don't put it all on me. You have a scent too."
"What do you really want?" Duppy asked.
Duffy closed his eyes and sighed. He hated thinking about the past, but he had made a promise and he would stick to it. "I promised the good Lord I would go legit if I got out of there without a hitch."
"So what do we do?"
"Well, stealing is a crime and it has gotten us nowhere. Look at that vendor," he said, pointing outside the window. "Look how happy he is, even though he hasn't finished selling his wares. Honest work comes with freedom and satisfaction."
Duppy nodded as he listened. He knew they had been the worst thieves in the history of thieves — always broke. No matter what they got from a job, it never lasted. They had no idea when the next job would come and so they just sat at home waiting. But that street vendor had a trade. He didn't wait at home — he went about doing his business. Maybe they could start something like that, he thought. "What do you have in mind?" he asked Duffy.
"We have no skills and have never done anything worthwhile. I was thinking we could start a car washing business."
"That sounds good, Duffy — you're a genius!" Duppy said, clapping his hands. "We could call it DD CAR WASH," he said with a grin.
"Sure, that sounds great. You know, I hope people understand that crime doesn't pay. It never does. It is just one step to prison or an early grave."
The Letter
There was another knock. Duffy went and opened the door, but he saw no one — just an envelope on the doorstep. He picked it up and tore it open. A piece of paper fell out. "What is it?" Duppy asked.
"A letter," he said, handing it over to Duppy because he couldn't read. "What does it say?" he asked, watching as Duppy scanned the letter with a frown.
"Come on, Duppy!"
"Well, let me read it now," Duppy said, clearing his throat.
Dear Duffy/Duppy,
I don't have much to say, but I guarantee you this — you will each earn a million dollars if you accept this job. Sorry I didn't put any details here, but as you know, I can't let it fall into the wrong hands. So if you agree, come to the Black Heart Bar.*
Yours Faithfully,
Greedy Heart.
The two friends just stared at each other, wondering what to do. They knew what a million dollars could do for them. It was a hard decision — the only time they had ever earned good money in their lives was when they worked with Greedy Heart. They sat there, staring at the letter, still not sure whether to go legit or stick to their worst calling.
Dumpy and Lumpy
Mr. Lucky reached his room and let out a breath he didn't know he had been holding. How could humans carry such a foul odour? He hurried to the phone and dialled the number given to him by one of his tenants who had been dealing with dead rats in his room. The tenant had claimed they were the best and their fees were cheap.
He dialled, and after about the fifth ring, a voice that sounded like it was recovering from a near-death experience answered. "This is Dumpy and Lumpy Extermination. Please state what you want and how we may serve you."
"My name is Mr. Lucky and I have a problem. I have a smell coming out of my rented house — it's occupied by two foul-smelling tenants. The place smells like a sewer disposal. Can you come over? I will triple your pay."
There was silence on the other end, and Mr. Lucky thought the call had ended. He pressed his ear to the phone and could hear breathing on the other end — getting more frantic. Then a voice came, not the one who had been speaking to him. This one sounded like it had seen the dead, or rather walked among them and survived. "Did you say smells like a sewer disposal?"
"Yes," he replied.
"Sorry. We are out of service."
And before the line went dead, he heard a string of cursing that nearly gave him a heart attack.
Duppy and Duffy
"I knew that look," Duppy said as he finally turned his head to face Duffy.
"What look?" Duffy asked him, not looking at his face.
"You're thinking of Greedy Heart's offer, aren't you?"
"What is wrong in weighing a business proposal?" Duffy asked him as he adjusted his sitting position.
"Come on Duffy, we were planning to go legit, you know, DD car wash business."
"We don't have the funds. This could be our last heist. It could be the start of something beautiful."
"That was the word you gave me last time," Duppy grumbled.
"Think of it, Duppy. We have never come into any bucks when we do it by ourselves. The only time we ever made any cash was with Greedy Heart."
"Are you saying we're not smart?" Duppy asked him, eyes narrowing.
"What of it?" Duffy asked, not backing down. "When last did you hold a crisp $50 dollar bill?"
"It has been long," Duppy admitted.
"See, we just need to hear Greedy Heart's proposal and if we don't like it, we can just walk away."
"But how do we get the fare to The Black Heart Bar?" Duppy asked him.
There was a nasty grin on Duffy's face. He knew Duppy would come around. After all, they had been partners in everything.
"Don't worry about that. We could borrow from our landlord."
"That mean man?"
"Don't worry."
The Black Heart Bar
Greedy Heart was having a nice time sampling every drink that passed his table. He laughed out loud and watched the strippers do their thing. He had come into good bucks from his last job and he thought he should have a ball. What was making him happy was the new job offer he had just gotten. When his two worst partners came, it would be a piece of cake. For now, he would have a blast.
The music was loud and the lights were dim to perfection. You could commit sin right there and no one would be the wiser. He grinned when the strippers shook their booty in front of him.
"Oh man, what a life," he thought.
He was nudged on his ribs by a man in a dark suit and dark glasses. The man had been giving him the creeps. He didn't like him at all, but the offer he was making was something he would put up with no matter how uncomfortable the man looked. Everything about the man was dark except his skin. The fool of a man even put on dark lipstick.
"What the hell," he thought, shaking his head.
"Owh, that hurt man. What is it?" he asked, irritated that the man could spoil his fun.
"When will your partners come? I'm getting impatient."
"Don't worry. Duppy and Duffy will be here. Trust me, they are the best."
"And I never heard of them?" The man asked skeptically.
"Exactly," Greedy Heart said, "because they know how to stay out of the cop radars."
"Are you saying they have never been caught?" The man asked, showing interest.
"Exactly."
"That is not possible. No one has been lucky in the underworld."
"Don't worry about it. They have their way."
"Alright," the man conceded. "Let them hurry. Time is money."
"Sure," Greedy Heart said as he focused more on the strippers now. He had missed a bit from the distraction. He needed to catch up from where he had stopped.
Mr. Lucky’s Misfortune
Mr. Lucky had had enough. He knew he had bad luck and he wondered why his parents could name him Lucky. What a hell of a life he had lived. And now he was paying the price of having the worst tenants in his building. They didn't pay rent, they had a scent that even the rodents stayed clear of. He had even stolen Duffy’s socks which he had kept in his attic and all the rodents living there had relocated. But now he had a problem not knowing how to get the socks off, because the scent coming from them was getting worse.
He sighed. This is not the life I envisioned when I got this house, he thought. He sniffed, and then he froze.
"No, not again," he muttered. "I can't handle it. Not like this. I can't. No way."
He was about to stand up and run when the knock came. I should have got out when they called me, he thought. He had smelled Duffy’s scent as they came near and it was playing funny with his stomach. He hurried to get his nose mask, knowing it wouldn't last but it was better than nothing.
He opened the door and saw the two worst tenants grinning like they had won the lottery.
"Are you here to pay for the rent?" he asked as his voice was muffled by the nose mask.
"About that, well, we have a business deal about to go down in a few minutes, but we need fare," Duffy said.
"So?" he asked.
"Well, I was hoping you could borrow us."
"I don't have," he said as he tried to close the door. Duffy put his foot, blocking it.
Mr. Lucky could see his mask melting little by little. No, this can't be happening, he thought.
"I talked to Mrs. Blueberry, you know," Duffy said with a grin.
Mr. Lucky froze. He had been in love with her and she had been making things difficult for him.
"Are you serious?"
"Sure. Wouldn't dream of lying to you."
"And?"
"Well, a hundred bucks for the answer."
"That is blackmailing me."
"No, it is called payment for service rendered," Duffy told him.
Grumbling, Mr. Lucky dipped his hand in his pocket and fished out a hundred bucks. He handed it over to Duffy.
"Now gimme the answer."
"She agreed on a date with you. From there it is up to you," Duffy said as he started moving away from Mr. Lucky.
What This Story Teaches Us
The Worst Thieves Alive is a dark comedy — but underneath the laughter and the legendary smell, it carries lessons that cut deeper than a spring on a broken couch.
1. Crime never pays — literally. Duppy and Duffy are three years behind on rent, eating expired beans, sitting on a scorched couch with an aluminium tin holding it together. Three years of stealing and they have nothing to show for it. The story doesn't lecture about crime — it just shows the result. That is more powerful than any sermon.
2. A promise to change is easy. Keeping it is the hard part. They made a vow to go legit. DD Car Wash was already named. Then the letter arrived. One million dollars has a way of making good intentions very flexible. The road to honest living is always one tempting offer away from collapse.
3. Bad luck follows bad choices. Mr. Lucky's name is a cruel joke — but his problems are not random. The tenants he can't evict, the car that eats money, the grocery shop he ate himself out of — these are consequences of poor decisions dressed up as misfortune. We often call bad luck what is really bad judgment.
4. Enablers suffer too. Mr. Lucky didn't steal anything. He didn't break any laws. But he is suffering the consequences of tolerating Duppy and Duffy for three years. Allowing people to take advantage of you has a cost — even if you are the victim.
5. Desperation makes people vulnerable. Mr. Lucky paid a hundred dollars to hear that Mrs. Blueberry agreed to a date. Duffy knew exactly which button to press. When people are lonely or desperate, others will always find a way to exploit that. The heart wants what it wants — and it will pay for it.
6. Honest work has a dignity that crime never will. The street vendor counting his cash, happy despite not selling everything — that image stayed with Duppy. There is a freedom in honest work that no heist can buy. Duppy saw it. He understood it. He just couldn't quite choose it.
Outro
And so Duppy and Duffy walk away from Mr. Lucky's door, a hundred bucks richer and one step closer to the Black Heart Bar. Greedy Heart is waiting. The man in the dark suit is watching. The strippers are dancing. And somewhere in the attic, Mr. Lucky's nose mask is melting, the stolen socks are releasing their fury, and the rodents are never coming back. The car wash business can wait. The promise to go legit is already cracking. Because a million dollars does not knock on a broke man's door every day — even if the man holding the letter smells like a sewer disposal. Duppy is already thinking about the coconut island. Duffy is already regretting the bald spot that will never grow back. And Mr. Lucky just paid a hundred dollars to learn that Mrs. Blueberry agreed to a date — a date he may never survive if the smell follows him there. Part 2 is coming. The Black Heart Bar is just the beginning. And Greedy Heart has never been known for generous deals.
What would you do if the letter arrived the moment you decided to go straight? Leave a comment below — we want to know.
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| Douye Soroh |
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