The Curse Of The Red Eye

Content Warning: Graphic body horror,family betrayal, moral horror.

The Curse of the Red Eye – Part 1

Alan has lived his entire life with a curse he knows nothing about. Every time it rains, his eyes weep blood — thick and red, drying shut by morning. He has never had a normal relationship, never lived a normal life, and his own mother refuses to explain why.

This is Part 1 of the Curse of the Red Eye series. When a witch finally gives Alan the first real answer he has ever received, it is not the one he expected — his suffering is not pointless. It is keeping two people alive. Now he has to go home and demand the truth from the two people who owe it to him most.

The rain always betrayed him.

Alan stood at the window of his small, dimly lit room, watching crimson streaks run down the glass like living veins. Thirty years old, yet every downpour still reduced him to that terrified ten-year-old boy who discovered his eyes could cry blood.

He wiped his face with the back of his hand, leaving a dark smear across his pale skin. In the reflection, his eyes glowed faintly red — not the warm brown his mother once claimed they were as a baby, but something unnatural. Something wrong. His dark hair was patchy in places, his ears mismatched, his frame still too skinny for a grown man. People looked away when they saw him. They always had.

A Legacy of Blood

His father had taken one look at him in the delivery room and fled, screaming that the child wasn’t his. His mother had only sighed that first time the curse awakened, twenty years ago, and whispered, “So it begins.”

She never explained. Not once.

Alan stared at the framed portrait on the wall — his mother and grandfather, smiling stiffly as if they hadn’t condemned him to this half-life. “What did you do?” he muttered. “What could possibly be worth this?”

He had begged them for answers. He had screamed at them. They remained silent, offering only vague comforts and herbal remedies that did nothing.

The Search for the Witch

Tonight had been different.

In that rundown backyard bar where desperate people traded rumors like currency, he had overheard the couple. The ritual. BlackEye. Blood in the rain. A mist that would lead the way.

Alan had followed the instructions with the bloody tears still running down his cheeks. Now he waited.

The temperature in the room plunged. Shadows thickened until the single candle on his table guttered and died. Black mist poured from the corners like living smoke, coalescing behind him.

A hooded figure took shape — faceless, yet unmistakably watching.

A sweet, ancient voice slithered through the dark. “Why do you seek me, cursed one? Your blood reeks of old magic.”

Alan turned slowly, heart hammering. “Are you the witch?”

The figure chuckled. “Foolish boy. You summon me and still doubt?”

“I need the curse lifted,” he said, voice cracking. “It’s destroyed everything.”

The witch tilted her hooded head. “What if I told you your curse is not a punishment… but a bargain? Your suffering sustains two lives. Remove it, and those lives end. Are you still so eager?”

Alan felt the air leave his lungs. “Two lives?”

“Yes.” The witch’s voice grew colder. “Ask your family. They know the price better than anyone.”

The mist began to recede.

“Wait—!”

But she was already gone, leaving only her final words hanging in the chill air: “If you still wish to be free… you know how to reach me.”

Alan stood in the returning silence, blood drying on his cheeks, staring at the portrait of his mother and grandfather.

His hands clenched into fists.

“It’s time to go home.”

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The Weight of the Truth

Alan cried that night.

Not the quiet tears of a tired man, but deep, broken sobs that shook his thin frame. The witch’s words kept echoing in the darkness: Your suffering is keeping two people alive.

Could he really end two lives to free himself? Did he even have the heart to become a murderer? Or would his conscience trap him forever in this blood-soaked prison?

The rain returned with a vengeance. Fresh blood poured from his eyes, thick and warm, gluing his eyelids shut by midnight. He lay there in silent agony, unable to open them, wondering if this torment would ever end.

The Journey Home

Dawn broke gray and unforgiving. Alan dragged himself to the bus station, dark spectacles hiding the fresh crimson stains on his face. He wanted the truth — no matter how ugly.

The twelve-hour journey felt eternal. He leaned his head against the window, letting the cold morning wind brush his skin as the bus tore through green fields and rolling hills glowing under the rising sun. For a brief moment, he allowed himself to admire the beauty he had been denied for so long. Then he closed his eyes and tried to sleep — the only real rest he ever got was during the day, far from the cursed rain.

A Dreaded Revelation

Back in the old family house, Clarion Bent felt her heart sink the moment Alan called. His voice had been steel: “I’m coming home, and this time you will tell me everything. No more lies.”

She had feared this day for thirty years.

She quickly called her father. Within the hour, Graham Bent arrived — still looking like a powerful man in his prime despite being close to two hundred years old. Broad-shouldered, strong as a bull, with thick dark hair and an aura of authority that made people underestimate his true age.

The Urgent Visit

“Father, thank you for coming so quickly,” Clarion said, embracing him.

“What is this about?” Graham asked, though his sharp eyes already suspected.

“It’s Alan. He’s coming home… and he wants answers about the curse.”

Graham’s face darkened. “We tell him nothing.”

“Father, he is thirty years old!” Clarion’s voice rose with long-suppressed anger. “He has never lived a normal life. No friends. No wife. No future. It’s time we let him go.”

Graham shook his head violently. “No. I’m not dying. I refuse.”

“You’ve already lived nearly two centuries because of your carelessness!” Clarion snapped. “Look at your grandson — suffering every time it rains, bleeding like an animal. And you still call this fair?”

“I’m not ready to die,” Graham muttered, turning away. “A dead man can’t enjoy life. I still have adventures ahead. I still have power.”

The Weight of Selfishness

Clarion stared at her father in disgust. “Everything is your fault. Your sin. Your mistake. Yet you’re happy to let your own blood carry it forever.”

Graham only kept muttering under his breath, “I can’t let go… No way am I going to die.”

The heavy silence between them was broken by the doorbell — the familiar, peculiar chime only Graham could produce.

They both froze.

Clarion sighed deeply and went to open the door.

He Came for Answers

Alan stood there, tall and gaunt, his dark spectacles doing little to hide the exhaustion and dried blood at the corners of his eyes. When his mother tried to hug him, he raised a hand sharply.

“Not now.”

He stepped inside without another word. His grandfather sat in the old armchair like a king on a stolen throne. Alan stood in the center of the room, looking from mother to grandfather, then spoke with quiet, burning intensity:

“Whose lives am I sustaining?” His glowing red eyes bored into them. “The witch already told me it’s two lives. Stop wasting my time. Tell me the truth.”

Clarion’s breath caught. “How did you—?”

“It doesn’t matter,” Alan cut her off. “I’ve bled enough for your secrets. I want my life back.”

Graham scoffed. “What kind of ‘normal life’ do you think you deserve? This is the life you were given.”

Alan’s voice cracked with pain. “I’m tired of bleeding from my eyes every time it rains. Tired of waking up with them glued shut. Tired of people looking at me like I’m a monster. I want it to end.”

Clarion stepped forward, tears in her eyes. “Father… please. He has a right to know.”

Graham’s jaw tightened, but he said nothing.

Alan took a step closer, his voice low and dangerous.

“Tell me the truth.”

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